Redesigned a LOGO, please critique

[ibodybuild]

Hey everyone well I redesigned the fitness logo from the one I had before because I beleive that it was too plain and that it really did not represent "fitness" in general.

So here is the redesigns, please help me on which one is the best, if none are good please give me some ideas how to make it better or if a new design would be better.

Thanks.

P.S. here was my other logo http://www.logodesignforum.com/forums/showthread.php?t=6222

[Chris]

I like what you have done there. I would try a different font though. That one looks to blocked - as in square. I think you are on the right track though with what you have above. Good Job!

[ibodybuild]

Hey thanks a lot, so do you think this one is better than my other?

For some reason I'm not liking this one because it's just not working for me, I mean I still want to keep the ****** from the other logo to represent the "talk", so what do you think I should do?

Thanks alot in advance.

[Chris]

I can say that the little speech ****** is pretty neat.

I seen your contest. I will see what I can do for you tonight.

Remember when you design for your self that is the hardest design to do.