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simplyg123
10th May 2007, 10:05 AM
Im just looking for a stern review of my latest logo, Please be honest



http://www.freewebs.com/simplyg123/lockett.jpg

wacki56
10th May 2007, 04:19 PM
..........not too shabby! Keep up the good work!

Bill

Doc
11th May 2007, 02:40 AM
Sharp distinctive logo! if I wanted to be really picky what are the 'bits' at the top right of the graduated fill? have you put a graphic there and made it transparent maybe?

simplyg123
11th May 2007, 08:42 AM
actually i dont see what you mean

Doc
11th May 2007, 01:31 PM
All becomes clear, I downloaded your logo to highlight the 'bits' I noticed (see first pic) I had zoomed in to circle these and doing so noticed more areas that did not match the background when I drew a line round these it looks very much like the letters LE so I think you may have written sample across the logo at some stage (see second pic) The areas outlined in black are colored C9C9C9 and the ones outlined red are E5E5E5

click on thumbnails to see larger version

Randy...
11th May 2007, 01:44 PM
These clearly stick out as lettering on all my monitors Doc. I couldn't see what you were talking about. There are no 'bits' from my end.

Doc
11th May 2007, 02:40 PM
Sounds like I need to clean my glasses or check the display :image10:

Randy...
11th May 2007, 02:43 PM
Gee thanks....I'll never get that 15 minutes I wasted on trying to find those 'bits'!! http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p174/digger2125/Msn4u_net20Funny13.gif hahahah....lol...jk!!

simplyg123
11th May 2007, 03:28 PM
lol, yeah it clearly says sample there bud
thanks any way though

Worlock
11th May 2007, 04:55 PM
Yeh...Its pretty clear on my screens too...I like the design simplyg123

simplyg123
11th May 2007, 10:33 PM
awesome, thanks everyone

Whippetgirl
13th May 2007, 11:02 PM
I like it keep up the great work.

Doc
14th May 2007, 02:26 AM
Sounds like I need to clean my glasses or check the display :image10:

Mystery of the display solved - somone (not saying who but only my wife myself and the dog live in the house) had altered the colour temperature of the monitor display - this after I spent ages getting it spot on. Now adjusted properly again the text stands out like a beacon :image10-1:

neubreed
11th June 2007, 11:52 PM
I think you could improve it by using the same font style throughout the logo, hope all goes well!

prototype66
12th June 2007, 09:32 AM
Great design! Definitally makes a strong product statement.