Ad Design

[LogoCreek]

any feedback?

[Lats]

My first impression was that it looked a little rough, something unusual from you.

A closer look shows your branding behind the Dans Bar bit was the culprit.

Is there an apostrophe missing in Dans Bar?

The 'R' in bar looks a little odd as well, is that due to shrinkage?

[jamirae]

it's been a long week for me.. that dollar a pint sure looks good!! ;)


yeah, I agree about the R and the apostrophe.. other than that.. I like!

[LogoCreek]

Hey..

I am with jamirae $1.00 a pint sounds GREAT! :banana


Lats.. there is no apostrophe is that set of image fonts. and that is how thr "R" comes out.

This is a very Rough draft. Matter of fact something I put together in about 3 minutes. (gotta LOVE TLC)

[Lats]

Originally posted by LogoCreek
...and that is how thr "R" comes out.
Umm, so it does, I hadn't noticed that before. A few of the other letters have that lighter look as well - K, L & Q

[Carly]

i'm so new here, i don't know if i should be offering feedback, but i think more guys would go to Dan's Bar if there was a beautiful girl in that picture ;)